At first I thought my cell phone was vibrating because of that background sound you inserted
0:41 you should have continued a bit more with that growling bass ( wobble )
because you cut it off (stopped it) in the wrong place
it should be continued a little longer to be as long as its bars before
so it melody goes up and then you stop it or end it with the bottom sequence (note).
so choose full up or down seq (not stop somewhere in between)
1:13 this riser/uplifter goes and goes and then just stops and nothing happens
1:28 here you need to start with a fat kick drum
whatâs missing is that fat kick drum and to finally get into the rhythm
you canât lift endlessly without getting into a rhythm
two or three times if you deceive the listener and after that, they will not pay attention to your song
The kicks drum should be stronger (more expressive and in the center)
these risings/uplifters you have at the beginning have deep tones (as they grow in freq) and they sound much louder than that kick
so you donât have the feeling that the kick is pumping because it is quiet in relation to other elementsâŠ
Some frequencies the human ear hears louder (similar to how the stronger we see the color red)
so donât be guided only by the volume knob⊠especially when you have uplifter âtoneâ that goes from 300hz to approx 15,000hz and whose volume changes depending on the current freq.
otherwise better than the first one because this one somewhat has a story